This is my narrative writing. I hope you enjoy my story.

One a horrible night Drake, Logon and Dad were going on a ship to Australia to meet a friend. “Dad when are we going to be there?” asked Logan. All of a sudden the alarm went off. Beep! Beep! Beep! “What's happening?” screamed Drake.  The ship lady said “put on all your life jackets”.

None of the ship was to be seen again.  The only ones to have come up and survive were Dad, Logan, and Drake.  They swam to a distant island and spotted some people. “Ahhh help” screamed Logan, “something’s got me!”  “Quickly drag him up shore” yelled Dad to Drake.

Something came racing out of the mist.  “A zombie! It’s a zombie” yelled dad.  “ARRE!!” the zombie hissed as he took off. Suddenly the ground began splitting apart.  A black hole appeared, it had screeching noises coming out of it.  “Run kids! Run!” yelled Dad.  “Why are we running?” asked Drake.  “Because that’s a portal that has zombies coming out of it as the hole gets a bigger size more zombies will come out”.  “Why don't we push them back into the portal?” asks Logan.  “Look dad a bulldozer” yelled Drake.  

So they all ran into bulldozer and they jumped inside. VRooooooom they started up the bulldozer. Logan and Drake saw a stack of guns.  “We’ll shoot” Logan said. “Ahhhh!” the zombies screamed. Drake and Logan were nailing them down. The zombie problem was almost over, they just kept pushing them over with the bulldozer.  

A few hours later the zombie portal closed up and in the distance they saw a  lost sail boat.  They waved their arms and got their attention. They asked if they could catch a ride back and they sailed back to the island. They didn't make it to Australia.