Let me tell you a story,One horrible morning in America there were two children named Jordan and Ella.One day Jordan was helping his dad on an experiment that made a copy of themselves.Later that day Robie and Jordan were finished there clone machine.
The next day they walked upstairs to have breakfast. Jordan had the leftover KFC from last night.later after breakfast Jordan told Dad its time to try out our clone machine.Jordan and Robbie burst down to the lab like bullets bursting at someone.Once they reached the bottom of the stairs they turned the invention on.”Jordan why don't you go first” Dad said “ok” Jordan said.Ok Jordan said in fear with jiggling hands just when Jordan walked through a rat jumped into the machine the clone came out terribly wrong the clone Jordan turned into a mutant from the sewers.When dad saw this he yelled WHERE'S JORDAN! Ella said he might of teleported up to his room because he invented he cut his rat head off. Jordans rat head grew out of his body so dad gripped his hands on the sledge hammer whacked the rat in the head slammed the humongous hammer on the head and Jordans head slowly grew out.Dad yelled Jordan thankyou for saving my life.
BY KOMMRAD!
THE END
very good story kommrad cant wait for a next piece
ReplyDeletehi Kommrad nice peace of writing realy enjoyed it cant wait for the next peace of writing.
ReplyDeleteyou could add some hummer.
see you soon Jacob
hi Kommrad nice peace of writing realy enjoyed it cant wait for the next peace of writing.
ReplyDeleteyou could add some hummer.
see you soon Jacob
he tino pai tenei
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