EOTC MAORI LAKERS

My group has been trying to find places to stay, activity's to do and places to eat for the four nights we will be staying on our trip. We have been working together as a group.  We were focusing on what each person was to do and decide after what are the best places and things to do including the cost was for our trip or not. We had to go into different classes to work with other students.

Right now here is my groups presentation.

Let me tell you a story,One horrible morning in America there were two children named Jordan and Ella.One day Jordan was helping his dad on an experiment that made a copy of themselves.Later that day Robie and Jordan were finished there clone machine.

The next day they walked upstairs to have breakfast. Jordan had the leftover KFC from last night.later after breakfast Jordan told Dad its time to try out our clone machine.Jordan and Robbie burst down to the lab like bullets bursting at someone.Once they reached the bottom of the stairs they turned the invention on.”Jordan why don't you go first” Dad said “ok” Jordan said.Ok Jordan said in fear with jiggling hands just when Jordan walked through a rat jumped into the machine the clone came out terribly wrong the clone Jordan turned into a mutant from the sewers.When dad saw this he  yelled WHERE'S JORDAN! Ella said he might of  teleported up to his room because he invented he cut his rat head off. Jordans rat head grew out of his body so dad gripped his hands on the sledge hammer whacked the rat in the head slammed the humongous hammer on the head and Jordans head slowly grew out.Dad yelled Jordan thankyou for saving my life.

BY KOMMRAD!

THE END

This is my narrative writing. I hope you enjoy my story.

One a horrible night Drake, Logon and Dad were going on a ship to Australia to meet a friend. “Dad when are we going to be there?” asked Logan. All of a sudden the alarm went off. Beep! Beep! Beep! “What's happening?” screamed Drake.  The ship lady said “put on all your life jackets”.

None of the ship was to be seen again.  The only ones to have come up and survive were Dad, Logan, and Drake.  They swam to a distant island and spotted some people. “Ahhh help” screamed Logan, “something’s got me!”  “Quickly drag him up shore” yelled Dad to Drake.

Something came racing out of the mist.  “A zombie! It’s a zombie” yelled dad.  “ARRE!!” the zombie hissed as he took off. Suddenly the ground began splitting apart.  A black hole appeared, it had screeching noises coming out of it.  “Run kids! Run!” yelled Dad.  “Why are we running?” asked Drake.  “Because that’s a portal that has zombies coming out of it as the hole gets a bigger size more zombies will come out”.  “Why don't we push them back into the portal?” asks Logan.  “Look dad a bulldozer” yelled Drake.  

So they all ran into bulldozer and they jumped inside. VRooooooom they started up the bulldozer. Logan and Drake saw a stack of guns.  “We’ll shoot” Logan said. “Ahhhh!” the zombies screamed. Drake and Logan were nailing them down. The zombie problem was almost over, they just kept pushing them over with the bulldozer.  

A few hours later the zombie portal closed up and in the distance they saw a  lost sail boat.  They waved their arms and got their attention. They asked if they could catch a ride back and they sailed back to the island. They didn't make it to Australia.